Tuesday, May 28, 2013

Shared poem with Miss H

AT THE PARK

Children riding bikes up and down the path.
Birds chirping and sitting in the trees.
Fresh air blowing around the park.
Children laughing and playing games.
I feel cold wind blowing up my sleeves.
Soft, wet grass squishing between my toes.
I am excited because ....
I am at the park.

By Eve,Charlie,Kaitlin,Zach, Xiarn and Te Atawhai


2 comments:

  1. Miss H - you and your little group of writers wrote a lovely shared poem together.
    From Mrs C

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    1. Thank you very much Mrs Chapman- you have a lovely and intelligent class :)

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