Monday, September 5, 2011

Storywriter of the Week!

We have been focusing on starting our stories with a great hook ...to entice and encourage our readers to sit up and listen.  Caitlin wrote the most wondereful piece last week.  Do you like her Hook?


Sausages  by Caitlin aged 7  dated 1st September.

Brown and lazy, rocking slowly, shaped like a rotton banana nearly falling off the table......it's a sausage, a fat free yummy looking sausage!

WELL DONE CAITLIN!  You are an amazing author!

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