The swishing, white, noisy water is talking when I walk along. The little waterfalls make a splashing, annoying sound when I jump around in it. The water is freezing wet and cold when I put my little feet into it. The water has yucky green bits and it's all slimy too! By Emma -age 6 Wow Emma- You used such clever adjectives to describe your walk. You also used a listing sentence. Way to go Emma!