The swishing, white, noisy water is talking when I walk along. The little waterfalls make a splashing, annoying sound when I jump around in it. The water is freezing wet and cold when I put my little feet into it. The water has yucky green bits and it's all slimy too!
By Emma -age 6
Wow Emma- You used such clever adjectives to describe your walk.
You also used a listing sentence.
Way to go Emma!
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