Some excellent writing from Room 1B

What was that loud bang? It really woke me up.  Room's 11 and 12 are getting smashed.  I see concrete crumbling. I can't see through all that rubble and dust.  I hear wood cracking and bricks thumping.  I feel the ground shaking under my feet.  What is all that rubble doing there?  My sister had to move classrooms.  No more Rooms 11 and 12!

By Nick Cater


That noise is like thunder - what is happening?  I can see doors getting pulled apart.  I hear buildings tumbling.  I feel really annoyed because they're taking the classrooms down.
What a mess!

By Coltyn

Why are they pulling down Room's 11 and 12?
I see people surrounding it to see what is happening.  I hear loud banging and crashing.  I feel scared and frightened.
Wow! What a big hassle. So much mess to still clean up.

By Emelia

Bang crash goes Room 11 and 12 as it smashes into pieces. I can hear big noises and things smashing.  The big diggers are demolishing the classrooms.  I smell dust.  I see a lot of mess.  Gosh I have never seen such a sight like this before.

By George.

Smash, bang, bang!  Why are there diggers by old Rooms 11 and 12.  What is happening?  There's engines rumbling , bricks falling, broken glass.  It's so like a new school now.
Just two weeks ago Mrs Gill was working in Room 11....but now her old room has been demolished.

By Summer

Look I can hear some rumbling noises coming from old Room's 11 and 12.  I wonder what's up.  I can't believe that old Room 11 and 12 are becoming rubble - because all I can see is rubble, rubble nothing but rubble.  I can also hear wood, bricks, concrete and metal breaking apart on the ground.  I feel nervous because when it is all gone what will be left?  It's silent now.  I think it's silent because all the construction gear has gone !

By Robert

Builders, diggers.  I wonder why they are there?  Wow I see the classrooms getting smaller as they work.  When I went past the classrooms at playtime.  I saw aan amazing site! The big tall classrooms turned into a big pile of crumbled concrete.  Old wood and smashed glass.  Oh my, that was a big process.

By Taylar