We have been focusing on starting our stories with a great hook ...to entice and encourage our readers to sit up and listen. Caitlin wrote the most wondereful piece last week. Do you like her Hook?
Sausages by Caitlin aged 7 dated 1st September.
Brown and lazy, rocking slowly, shaped like a rotton banana nearly falling off the table......it's a sausage, a fat free yummy looking sausage!
WELL DONE CAITLIN! You are an amazing author!
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